Hey everyone!! Well I'm so glad that I'm done revising my essay and e-mailed it. That's a weight off my shoulders. I'm really confused in turning and receiving the essays, but hopefully after this essay is done and graded, I'll get the hang of it. Also, learning about the second stage was kind of neat. I really didn't pay attention to the controlling idea, but knowing now that it can catch the readers attention really puts it into perspective for me, and I'm going to watch out and make sure that I make it interesting. Even the outlining and clustering, I think it's cool, because it shows what you're trying to get at in your essay. Well anyways, I hope to see everyone in class on Thursday!!
--tasha
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That is good that you have already revised your essay, as for me she never received mine so I have to re-send and re-do everything all over again; lucky you.
ReplyDeleteGood job on turning in your essay and revising it.
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